*EDIT* i have re-uploaded the song because there was a disgusting cut-out that i have now replaced with a beautiful FADE!!! IM SO EVIL...... :P *END EDIT*
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I LOVE THIS SONG SO MUCH!!! the first of many trance tracks i will produce - i seem to have found my genre ;D
It has some kicking drum beats that are mega funky, a very cool sub-melody that is chilltastic, and a main melody that really flows nicely with the song. I really, really, really hope this can make it into top 5 so everyone please vote nicely and fairly, please no zero bombing, it's just low and holds people down who work really hard and put a lot into their music ;(
I put so much time and effort into this one, and it sucks cause i only had an fl7 demo at the time (then again i only have an fl8 demo now), and so i had to do like a massive 2-3 hour chunk in the day to make this ;( which is not how i like to work.
I'm not quite sure how to improve on this one so PLEASE give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, i'd love to hear it for this song (unless its about the built up to the main melody cause i know thats a bit bad ;P) By the way this was the last song i made with fl7 demo and everything i upload from now on is shiny new FL8 demo stuff so prepare to enjoy ;D (ive gotten a lot better and FL8 is a way better program)
THANKS EVERYONE WHO HAS SUPPORTED ME *fingers crossed for top 5 :D*
-Info-
BPM: 140
Patterns: 24 (including effects)
Made In: 2-3 Hours
Made With: FL Studio 7 Demo
dont think so.
This sucks haha. You've lost the main purpose of music- to convey emotion and feeling. This just sounds like a lot of electronic riffs shoved together. Seriously, I cant believe how full of yourself you are because you made a generic trance song that doesn't even flow properly.
fuck you
you could at least put it in a nicer way. it doesnt SUCK, it could just use more improvement and a less generic sound. you dont have to be cruel.
im not full of myself dipshit, im open to criticsm because i want to get better, last tiem i checked that's just called being human
Not bad.
I can tell you why this got beat out for #2 by the Umms and ahhas song. It's unfortunately too standard, not offense, I like it but being an FL Studio user myself I can hear the premade loops that you used, the drumz especialy, I think you used DL_Aspirin, DL_Deadmaus, and I'm sure there's another one there too, DL_Elements, if I'm hearing that correctly. Understand that alot of people on here use FL Studio, so if you're going for orginality, stay away from the premade stuff. I'm telling you this because I too have made things with the presets and it all sucks. Now, looking at the fact that you are DJ, well, that's what Djs do, so for that you get my 3/5 and 6/10. IMO though, take out the FL Studio drumloops and put in something a little more unique/original and you'd have my 15. I like the song other than the DLs.
you put that a lot nicer than the person above you, hideto, but yes i did make this a WHILE ago, like a year ago so i was just starting out and was crap so that's why i was always using loops and shit.
and yes ur spot on with pretty much all 3 of those drums, i think i also used one more..... lol :P
thanks for reviewing..... 3 isnt bad xD
Enjoy'ed
I 5'd and 10'd,
I really liked it and loveded it, every thing was really nice, but around 1:30 I really hated that cut out and then started back up... but besides that I liked it....
oh yeh i hate that too xD
see i made this a while ago and i was really crappy at build-ups xD
but thanks you SO MUCH for ur review ;D i was really hoping ppl would liek this and u have made my day ;D
*EDIT* yeh i just re-uploaded this so there is now no mroe disgusting cut-out xD
good old nero audio editor + audacity ;D
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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