Finally! It is out!
I have been working on this one for 5 hours! It is finally done!
I would have to say that it is one of my best so far (hopefully better songs will come, I am still new to the whole "Music making thing)
Enjoy,
-Liam
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sounds a bit filtered, and a bit unpredictable, there were too many breakdowns and solos, i dont think all the sounds worked together.
i would recommend working mroe than 5 hours next time. im really sorry to say something that harsh but i just need more melody and harmony, even in heavy metal.
Alrighty-Then...
First off I have a question. Are the guitars real? Or generated? Because they don't sound very real. And that is a problem. I mean, if they aren't real, I won't hold that against you. Cause not everyone has the ability to record themselves playing. But if they are real, then you need to work on their sound a bit.
Now as for the song as a whole, I like it...To an extent. It is very in your face at times, and has nifty beats. Very electro/industrial kind of metal sound. Your kick is fucking awesome, I simply love that sound. But I do think you could expand on the drums a bit. Maybe add some cymbal stuff, because it doesn't sound like there is any.
As for the structure of the song, I really don't know what to say. It is kinda difficult to follow the structure because it doesn't vary much. Now I don't mean it doesn't vary in instruments and all. But rather musically. Because it seems like you switch off from one drum rhythm to another without any rhyme or reason. And like I said before, the guitars are rough. Extremely hard to follow them at all.
But i LOVE the overall wound you got as a whole. So I'ma give you a 4/5 and 7/10 overall. As weird and eccentric as this is, I really like it a lot. But it could use a lot of work. If you do any more work in the future let me know. I would like to hear the changes you made.
-Gravey-
P.S. - This has been favorited. :-)
Thanks for the nice review, and to answer your first question, Yes the guitar is fake. And thanks you very much for helping me out I really appreciate it and these types of reviews encourage me to keep going,
Thanks much,
-Liam
I like pie......
but 8/10 because it sounded a little generic
Thanks? I think...
Could be better, but it's good for starting
As people have previously stated, claps are annoying in this. There are some places in here that the claps are good, just not everywhere in the song. Personally I'd like a little more guitar work to push it more towards metal instead of techno, that may just be me though.
-Liam
Your name is Liam to?
Well anyways thanks for the comment! I will try harder next time!
-Liam
Im guessing..
You just downloaded FL and played about and this was the result?
Heck, I did the same once ;D
Not bad but it really could be ALOT better..
Liam :)
Sweet! Same name! (That barely ever happens lol)
anyways, aside from that :), I didn't just download FL and mess with it, I made this song with a program called LMMS,
But you were right about me being new to it :)! This is my third day with it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
StarGaming 
