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on the negative

kind of overused the synths.....
quite repetitive
horrible beat
worse melody
main chorus doesn't start till 1:45.....which is stupid
i don't know why i named it that..
fractionably isn't even a word (refer to positive section)

positive section

the names still fractionably cool (maybe?)

medium section

volume should be turned full for best results

umm....happy new year?

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Average Score: 9.0 / 10

Score: 10

"lol"

by: Mahelyk

date: May 19, 2009

see, when i try to make music or songs and say what you do they come out as crap. But you say it and your song comes out great!! So it truley makes me wonder what your song would sound like if you only said positive...... =)

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Score: 7

"you and your complaning"

by: Remixz

date: April 27, 2009

i was going to give you full pot, but after i read your comment, i gave it 2/5 and 7/10 BUT THE SONG IS NOT BAD, ITS ACTUALLY KINDA GOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDD

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Score: 10

"Your the best"

by: Neilson1337

date: February 27, 2009

Dude i just made this account to tell you that your the best author ive ever seen on newgrounds so i hope you will keep on the good work i putted like all ur song on my ipod :) good luck on all your next song thought :P

February 27, 2009

Author's Response:

wow!! i don't know how to reply to that.....thank you....

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Score: 10

"NICE!!"

by: SHADOWTECH147

date: January 4, 2009

i loved it and i dont think its to repetative and its a really cool song so you should have more positive then negative stuff great job i loved it well done

February 27, 2009

Author's Response:

thanks man, i just heavily critique myself, its a force of habit i suppose..

appreciate the review : )

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Score: 8

"Coolio."

by: TheManWhoLaughs

date: January 2, 2009

Hm, you seems to be quite hard on yourself, but that's suppose to be a good thing in artists. Or in my experience a common thing. Anyway, your song is pretty good, I liked it. It seems kinda generic techno, but still has a good wavering beat, and I especially like how it gets at like 2:45 and then again at like 3:00 with heavy bass. Anyway, it was good just not the best. Enjoyed.

January 2, 2009

Author's Response:

haha thanks man, and yeah i completely agree with the generic thing.....i thought it was gonna turn out completely different but ended up quite plain.....ah well maybe next time..
i dont know why but i seem to always rip on myself.....but anyway thanks for the review