You know what

This beat is sick. I can find a very good use for it in my animation. Trust me you will not be dissapointed.

This could have been very good...

The intro was very nice, it built up slowly and created a good atmosphere. But then, when it "kicked in," you completely wrecked it by mixing two different keys. The instruments you used are too up-beat, and so are the melodies.
You can't make good dark tracks with sytrus. Try moving into 3xosc a bit. (Not the premade instruments, you should obviously make the sounds yourself) (Theres probably a few tutorials around somewhere)
Anyway, you have a few of the right ideas but you're not moving in the right direction for dark DnB tracks.
7/10
3/5

-xXSnowBladeXx

massive skillz

kickass sound

if i ever get the chance.......

i might use this, or one of you're others. They're awesome and i'd like to use 'em, but......im a shit animator, and the setting of my ani. needs to be right.

WHOA!

nice! I like it!
I think it must be great for a madness ^^
5/5
10/10