Score: 9
"Here is what I want you to do."
date: March 29, 2009
The notes your wrote are indeed quite good!
But its too perfect for it to be believable. The timing of the notes are on the dot. Try using groove shifters, humanizers or just drag them manually so that it feels as real musicians instead of perfect computers.
The same goes for velocity. I do hear some volume changes here and there. But in order for an instrument to sound real, you should not only write notes but also velocity changes. You can do so much more this way and give a melody an completely different feel as well.
In sheet music this is translated in FF ( fortisimo), F (forte), MF, P, and PP for example. What I mean is that sheetmusic is more then just notes, and when you write nice stuff like this you should also write more then blocks on grids.
All in all my compliments!
Spine Therapist
