nice one dude!!
Nice work with this one especially the solo at the end. But I am still gonna impale for playing that part between 7 seconds to 9 seconds. You got drums and everything over here. Now try virtuoso style mofa
Author Comments
Sheesh Kabob!
Took me the whole darn day to produce>.<!
Have a nice day!
Iranarama responds:
LOL. 0:07-0:09 is so gay that its epic...
Hells yeah, the solo was like metal, the riffs were bubble gum rock and punk, and the intro is gay punk hahah.
Mixed in pretty well...
Good Song
I don't actually know much about music, and I hate most bands or anything in charts. BUT this music... This music is actually good! =) I enjoyed listening to it while writing this review. I agree with Rwinius, that it is a bit empty, but I do not agree with the drums feeling slow. The guitar did feel a little tiny bit slow, but I thought that gave it that good feeling. Keep it up!
Iranarama responds:
Wow dude, that means a lot ! thanks!
I too hate basically hate ALL music on the charts now. Rock and Roll is dead to me.
That is why i only listen to the original pioneers and best! (sabbath, ramones, zep, deep purple, blue cheer, yard birds, hendrix, ETC ETC)
I realized that the intro riff sounds like something a shitty band like Simple Plan might play, then right after get into a gay tasteless slow teen punk rock song.
So, knowing this, the next riff went into something more Bubble Gum rock (like Blondie/Ramones) sooo yeah, ithink THAT one bit totally transitioned the whole song from not sucking butter-milk lol.
Yeah I just realized now that the guitars are not as fast as they could be, but i was intending that ;)
Thanks for the review and the thumbs up.
Good Day to ya'!
mwa
hmm the electric guitar is to slow when switching chords, and mayb the drums are a bit too slow, at least in the first part..
result, a song thats kinda empty and lacks harmony
it does get better after the song progresses, but then (2.50) you break the chord down and throw out a solo with a different filter or something, doesnt really fit.. nicely played anyhoo :D
your individual skills are not bad, but your skills as a band (assuming the drums arent computer generated) need work!
Iranarama responds:
Thanks for the constructive criticism. You didn't just bash the things you didnt like, but told me what to improve, which is something NO ONE seems to do anymore!
The drums are computer generated haha, i had to put em all together so it was difficult. Its my 2nd song using drums. So it was a bit hard for me to put it together. I put it the drums first then i played guitar on top of it.
Once I get all my songs together I'll be going to a real producer and a studio so I can add this "harmony" to them all ahah ;)
Peace out Rwinius.
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- Dec 29, 2008
- 2:36 AM EST
- Genre
- General Rock
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- 6.4 MB
- 4 min 42 sec
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