Score: 10
"NICE! You did enter!"
date: December 24, 2008
That pretty much synches it: I lost this constest lol. And just because you're one of my favorite artists doesn't mean you're escaping a thorough critique.
1) I would classify this as rock, sounds pretty rock-ish to me.
2) The sad ambience of the piano is amazing.
3) The jump-in of the guitar was sickening, but the guitar doesn't match the chords of the piano initially.
4) Drumbeat is sick as always.
5) Just a little repetitive, not too much, but just a little bit.
6) From 2:15 to 2:52, you should have added just a little more variety.
7) The finish is nice, but you could have turned the guitar solo up just a tad bit.
All that, and you still get a ten though cuz this song is still amazingly good.
And it looks like the zerobombers got at you too. Been happening to me all week.
December 24, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and support. If only I had found out a bit sooner about it and had some more free time I could have attempted at something more 'dynamic'. I appreciate you taking the time to review my submission and I apologize for not extending others the same courtesy. Not that I don't enjoy listening to your tasteful submissions but I find myself severely lacking at critiquing the works of other artists hence I only do it over PM and if only asked lol. I wish you good luck with your entry Unfettered Heroism
As for zerobombers, they will always be around. All we can hope is that those that like it get a chance to hear our respective pieces.
