Cool but it doesn't give me a Daft Punk vibes..

Clean

Work on more instruments and add EFFECTSSSS. Variating the effects would do great things for this song. Filter, cut, distort, feedback, echoe, reverb, WHATEVV. Just DO IT... then post back.

And add another instrument.

It Passes!

Now, I give a you a score of 6-7 which means in my books that it's good enough for download and it is enjoyable.

Because of its short length and relative simplicity, this piece reminds me more of a lead-up rather than a stand alone techno song.

Still, very nice piece.

You're Going To Hate me for this.

Check it. You're on the right track for sure! I cannot, in good conscience, give this top votes because of it's lack of changes. I know that repetition is the main staple in the techno genre but again, that's usually when it comes to the melodies.

You're melodies were ok. Maybe a little delay and some octave notes could have taken the same pattern and made it sound like 2 different parts even though it's the same thing only higher pitch.
The Bassline was great but that back beat could use some variation. Things like fills, different breakdowns with snare sound variations, maybe a cliche' snare roll, something! Cymbals and hi hats make a great release, don't underestimate the power of the drums. They will make you or break you.

Please don't take this as a flame, I give the utmost respect to people who are willing to put themselves out there. Trust me. I've been making music since 2003, and it was only the last couple of weeks that I started releasing legitimate songs with my vocals on them. But you wanted criticism, as do I, Good or Bad. Keep it going man, you'll get it!

sick

you are the man!