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Dec 21, 2008 | 5:23 AM EST
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4.7 MB
4 min 47 sec
0.74 / 5.00

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Rated 0.74 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

I've been told over and over that I need to work on my song structure. I usually have a constant buildup till the end, as opposed to the tried and proven structure of winding up and down, so that's what I've tried to achieve in this song.

I'm happy with the tunes and sounds I created, so I like to think this turned out alright.
Enjoy :]

Made in FL Studio 8 XXL Producer Edition and Sony ACID Music Studio 7



Rated 3 / 5 stars


well, for most songs, that max you wanna hold the same melody for is about 8 measure, or else it begans to get drawn out and seems a bit boring. Also, the melody you had in place her really didnt seem to grasp me that well. It seems like something thrown together, not too well organized, cause there's a real lack of bass for a significant length of the song, which is nearly comes in to the middle, but it really doesn't work well with the main melody. I know that you have a sense of being able to use chords, but you just need to add alot, and take out a bunch of stuff that doesnt fit with the song.

also, it seems like it's gets off beat for some reason, so work on that too.

gl in the future.

CeruleanSoldier responds:

thanks for the constructive crit. i kinda get what you mean for the most of this, and i'll try and fix it up for the album release. thanks heaps :]