Not bad

Not bad but not perfect and I found somethings I think you should improve on!

First the melody at 0:16 I think is too loud hurt my ears a little maybe lower that some so no one bleeds

Second add some bass lol trance needs some bass lol.

Third get some variation going On lol I think this song is way to repetitive and needs some variation.

fourth. Maybe work on the drum beat a little its fairly generic not much going on with it!

5th (last) You need to work a outro into this song It just kinda ends like that!

So yeah I think if you work on this some it could turn out to be great!

7/10
4/5

Have A Great Day

XenoxX :)

Nice melody

I'm really liking the riff in the high synth - reminds me of all the good stuff I like about trance, and it really does project a floaty feeling or sorts. The secondary drum rhythm starting at about 1:20 feels a bit strange in my opinion, almost clumsy feeling - it's probably just a bit too break-beatish I guess. Also, though I like the fact that you often mix up the instruments, having the main drums drop out too much kind of makes it lose it's drive - it's especially noticeable since the piece isn't very long (relatively to most trance pieces). But overall, I liked this piece - it's fairly simple melodically and rhythmically, but still evokes complex feelings. Nice job.

cool

10/10 and ill gve 5/5 every voting day
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kalphite pwange

Nicely done!

the opening was nice.
i like the whole song, it works pretty well.