TRANSITIONS
The transitions are HORRIBLE! like at 0:38 and 1:12. Why the heck did it cut off at 1:32??? UGH another bad transition at 1:37. You also need more sounds. You don't need to continue the same drums the whole song. Gets repetitive.
Sorry for being so harsh but this song would be AMAZING with the right work. You just need to work out all the kinks