its alright but...

like the other guy said monotone! u kno i like the melody but make it more like have a climax u kno what i mean? listen to apoplexia's yakuza and ull c what i mean but still u did good! but remember the suggestion okay?

Well...

... I like the loop, the beat is simple and works fine with the rest of the song, but still, I think I´ve mentioned in earlier reviews that ur stuff is a little monotone, and that nothing much happens.
I would say this is more trance then techno, but seriously, im not 100% sure what the hell the dif. between techno n trance is (i got a hunch, but nevermind...)
If u keep on making "monotone" music like this, i got two advices for ya;

first, instead of making a long song, make a shorter loop that could be useable for flash artists. This song, if made a shorter loop out of it, might be very usefull for artists here on NG!
Second, you could make several shorter loops and simply "bridge them together" into a full song. Maybe keep one part that follows throuhg the whole song, and lead synths that would make the dif. Just experiment, man!
This loop is quite cool still, and u keep on getting better n better.
Keep it up, n keep on experimenting!
Peace!