OOOOHH NIICE!

That beat is wicked! I can't make breakbeat as good as this, I just stick to DnB.

This is a huge improvement since your last upload, you should make it longer.

I really like that beat. My suggestion is to make the beat louder and a bit distorted and give the kick and snare a little more thump. I think that's just personal preference though. One thing I try to do is give the beat some depth. So when I make DnB, I make the main beat in the mid's and low's then I add some high end hats so give the beat more flow. I think you should try that here.

The bass is a little bland, not much going on there. This is one of the main things that puts me off when I hear this track. If you make the bass more exciting, like using automation clips to automate the cutoff or using filters and stuff, you can keep the listener interested for longer.

So overall this is a great start. The beat could do with some EQ'ing and filtering, but that's just my taste. However, the bass needs improving.

7/10 [4/5]

Alright after a while...

This was a bit boring at the start, but then made sense about 6 loops after. 4/5, 8/10