I liked it

Besides what admiral poopy pants said this is a very hot track. I here the multiple voices and the angst coming right out of this. I can smell it too. I like the song you have the pain and the emotion of a good indy track.

it's ok

I'd agree with dj-sleeper about your strokes-like sound with guitar, if you'd played that in a higher octave, it would have sounded like the chorus to "Reptilia", haha. I really like when the bass guitar comes in, cool bassline indeed.

However, I have a few critiques:

1. I'll start off by saying that sleepers review did not come off as condescending at all, and if you can't take a review as kind as that, maybe the music business is going to be FAR TOO INFURIATING FOR YOU.

2. I agree that your vocals are not really in time, though sometimes they are. I also just don't like your vocal melodies. When you actually have a vocal melody, it's too low for your voice.

3. The song is lacking power, it's missing like a bridge building up to a euphoric final chorus release, or something maybe less generic than that formula, but something nonetheless.

Just a few things.

-ac-