Score: 7
"Alice 2000"
date: January 1, 2009
Not a bad tune - this seems more of a modern adaptation of how life would be like for a modern day Alice in Wonderland, as she steps through the rabbit hole in pursuit of the ever-elusive White Rabbit.
A new world of whimsy and wonder awaits, but the problem with this tune is that if you're going for this analogy, it needs to have a darker, more sinister side of the coin, so that you can express the point of how scary it was for her.
Also, you could trim the bass line at the end for time, it's not needed with that low hum, once the rest of the tune has finished.
[Review Request Club]
April 13, 2009
Author's Response:
Yeah I'll trim the end. I like the idea of having a dark side. Maybe I'll add a darker version as an interlude on the album half way through, using some similar melodies so that it's recognizable. Thanks for the review.