Well put.

I like how the melody rolls in the song. But the guy below I would have to agree with. Some sounds do go well with the song, especially the bell. Others... not so much, I like the song overall. It's got the ambient feel too it. :)

Seethrough.

I think a good rule of flash applies here: ''If you're good at flash, people won't know it's flash at all''.
Full of life and well constructed, but it stinks of fruity loops. Try to steer away from the stock instruments and make more authentic sounds.