Score: 6
"Nicely done"
date: December 4, 2008
Thank you for bringing emotion and some actual vocals to the portal. It's a great change and very refreshing.
It's a nice tune, with some real heart in there.
The guitaring sounds pretty good. But that's not my area really. But it's good nonetheless
The vocals are nice, kinda hard to hear, but that's the quality. Nice harmonies and good lyrics too.
One thing, however, is I'm not really so sure about the amount of times you have harmonies. Cos, you use them to emphasise phrases or words or choruses. But, you seem to be harmonising every other word really. So it doesn't stand out, but kinda blends in and gets repetitive.
A final thing is, you can sing louder. As the song progressed it built up, and the guitar got louder and more passionate... But the vocals sounded around the same volume. Don't be shy to belt it out.
December 4, 2008
Author's Response:
Haha, problem is, belting it out with this microphone causes major scratchyness with the speakers, so unfortunently I can't sing as loud as I wanted to. I had to be a be careful (somehow the guitar never seems to make it do it, though).
I was really just experimenting with the harmony parts, as I've done it before but was trying to do something different... didn't work out the way I'd planned, but hey, you've got to make mistakes to learn to fix them, haha.
Thanks for listening!
~Tovi~
