Score: 8
"Great"
date: December 22, 2008
I really liked it. It reminds me of old medieval music, which coincidentally is exactly what I have been looking for lately. And don't worry about age for your musical education, when I was in forth grade I took cello lessons (my school had an orchestra program) but I didn't continue with them. Now, seven years later, I regret stopping (I can't even read music anymore).
Oh well, enough ranting. I give it a 8/10 for the emotion and power behind it, but I cannot give it a full 10/10 because, quite honestly, it's not complete. It's a personal song, I get that, but if it is for the purpose for which I believe it to be for then it needs more. An instrument's (and indeed, the instrument's player's) potential is not known until it is contrasted to other, subtle and ambient sounds of other instruments. This has but one emotion for one message, when it should have many emotions to share through one message. Add to it, make it something grand and powerful that conveys your message and emotions.
December 24, 2008
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your review, you have no idea how long I have waited one... And very constructive review it is :). About the one and only instrument, the reason is because I wanted to play this one fully alone, may sound kinda stupid but I think this one reached it's goal, so this song is finished. Furthermore I probably won'nt make any more one instrument songs. I wish to make some dialog music but untill then I want to try different things (also in metal) and progress in the musical studies.
Once again thank you very much, Francisco.
