Needs work

I think that you've made a decent start - maybe work on making that beat sample a lot quieter though, as without it, the track will sound a lot better, but maybe you could get away with some sort of beat for the piece.

It needs to be longer and have more variation, so keep experimenting and throw us something else that you're working on and we'll try to point you in the right direction with it :)

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Well

First good thing, it loops perfectly, at least you made it. Though, it was really annoying to be honest, maybe try to compose a more interesting chord progression, let the piano play proper chords or to add more melodies. Also the drums didn't fit the song, add a real solid beat - that snare fill was not even a beat. Keep on practising and you will get better with composition.

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Loops pretty good

But sounds a bit boring as it is now.
While the tune is very much 8-bit like and I can imagine this being used in some sort of cave or dungeon level, there isn't that much else to it.

I expected the drums to last until the end after the part at 0:06. It would also make the song more insteresting as the listener has something more to listen to.

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Hmmm.

The midi beat sound didn't go well with the percussion, the two didn't complement each other well. Not a bad tune though, good loop for some video game scene - it would have to be a bit longer though as the drums would get annoying. Keep up the work.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

Simply done

This could have been maybe 3 seconds longer and after the drum part you could have added a hi top or a clap to make it sound more sophisticated in sound. Overall though the quality was decent enough that it might possibly go for being a tutorial stage song or title screen music in a game. Well made it was.

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