nice

nice song!very well done!awesome song!just fix the little problems and its perfect!
especially the bass but its still good

Dayum

Dayum dude this is pretty dam good for your first song man fix the little things and it will be prefect ( more bass )

I Agree

I agree with TechnoKidd that this is very good for your first. To me it sounded slightly Zelda'ish. The only thing i didnt like about it was that it came to a sudden stop not any fading out or build-down.
9/10
5/5

Not bad for your first song,

I liked the build up in the song. It sounded pretty cool. I would say....add more bass. I was kinda waiting for there to be more bass when the synth came in. If there were more deep bass, it would be awesome! =] like i said, not bad for ur first song.