I dunno...

It was pretty bad. The repetition really started to get to me after a few measures. It probably would have been better if you gave each part a little variety, like merge two of your repeating guitar parts together and play them ABABABAAB or something like that, just so it didn't seem so dragged out. I think it was good that you just stuck with just the bass drum for backup instead of adding snare and hihat and all that. It added just enough depth for what you were doing.

You might have something here, but you have to make quite a few changes to bring out its potential.

Nah man, just nah...

This plainly sucked. I´m sorry, but there was nothing to it at all. Just a guitarrsound and a piano. Good thing u can see something when u hear this (u wrote; "guitar and a piano meet is a dark alley. Chaos follows."), but I only hear a bad riff, some ill- sounding piano stuff and a basedrum, and none of em works together...
work on it man!
Peace.