hmm.....

what accapella <---(probably spelled it wrong) is this song from?

and btw, this track is alright...

Finally

Good Choice of Remixing

Overall the song was really good. The only problem was that the song would sometimes go over the tempo leaving the song to find its own tempo after time. I know its really hard to make a mix on FL Studio (guessing thats what you used. correct me if im wrong)and thats why im not driving it down your throat.

i gave you a
5/5(+0.37)

So anyways

Just so you know, you cannot use ANYTHING that is not yours in your song, such as the a cappella you used. Not just because you've made a legal claim that everything in this song is yours, and it clearly is not, but because doing things like that can cause Newgrounds to get in trouble (ie sued). That just doesn't seem fair to Tom.

Regardless, Im going to review the song now. Overall, it is mastered rather well, but, it seem like the lyrics are a little loud in the mix. It could use some more variety in the background, but as it is, its not bad.
I like some of the rhythmic effects applied in the backgrounds, and i disagree with the guy below, because it sounds to me like the vocals match up quite nicely with the beat.

My suggestion is that from now on, you should try and get people to do original rap for you. There are some pretty good rappers on NG (warspawn being one that I know of). As a bonus, it will be both amazing, and original, and trust me, you'll be much prouder of the result.

Good Day!
7/10
4/5

Ok...

I don't think the beat goes with the lyrics. If u adjusted a little bit i think it would sound way better. The beat is too soft. Or the lyrics are too loud. Make them even. It sounds empty how it is now. Other than that good song. 8/10 5/5 Btw mind checking out my songs? Thx!