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Date
11/18/2008
File Info
Song
2.6 MB
2 min 19 sec
Score
3.57 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.57 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

This is the first song I've made using FL studio.
thus, this is the first song I've entirely composed myself.
no using loops from an external source.
nuthin'.

So please take this into consideration, and reviews would be greatly appreciated, because I know i need the input.

I tried to make this song as weird, and eerie as possible, while it still being a song.

Hope you enjoy it.

Rion

Reviews


Thief1337Thief1337

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars November 18, 2008

Ehm...

First of all, you should customize the sound your "hand-clap" produces. I don't know but it just gives a little bit the "basic amateur" smell... because you leaved the percussion at his default settings.
You can use FPC for the percussion too. It sounds a little bit more realistic. With your music, it's not techno or electro, or whatever. That's why your hand-clap sounds a little bit weird.

The melody sounds false at 0:29... that's what I think. Maybe not, but you should take a look back at your notes. It sounds really too weird. I think you could be able to make something ambient.

I don't like the pauses you put at 1:22 with your synth. It just sounds not complete. There's nothing in the background at that moment. It's not complete or developed.

You have the style in you and you have potential. I hope my critic helped ya. I give you a 3/10 in overall. Take that review in a constructive way... it's not to under-estimate yourself. Don't give up and keep up the work!


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RionHunter responds:

okay, cool.
thanks.
You're definitely not wrong.
Rion