Too simple
I'm sorry, but you can't make an effective loop from 9 notes, then loop it around again, to double it in length and then drop the whole double loop by one octave and play it over again.
It doesn't convey anything that people want to know about what the tune relates to. Listen to the tunes that accompany 8-bit games. Seriously, the term "8-bit" does not translate to pile of shit, so why feel that making a tune like this will do games of this calibre any justice?
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