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I don't think that the organ thingy you added was nice. You should try using some strings, or even the piano instead of the organ, it would sound a lot better. I didn't like that drum kick (or whatever it was, and you know what drum kick I'm talking about :P ), it's not really a hip-hop kind of thing.
The other drum kick (hip-hop one) the clap and the hats are good enough, it doesn't need any changes on that.

Cool.

nice. But kinda pausy.