Hey, I think it's good, what do you think?.
Impressive for 13 years old! :D
I have to say that I'm impressed to listen to a song made by a 13-year-old kid. I love the piano though, but you could soften it down a little bit more just to feel that the notes are constantly minimalistic-like. The chords, somehow, have a whole lot of extensions to them, but that doesn't matter much. :)
Try to deviate your drum pattern some more too.
Wow, thanks man!
The drum pattern is something like... I dont know, I wanted to make a slow one and it's te better to use right here, sometimes I forget to change it, thanks.
~Bru2712
It's a start
It needs a lot of refining, but on composition this is very nice!
Thanks, the bad thing is the demo I have, I cannot modify my works, sorrry.
~Bru2712
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Bru2712 
