verin100

wrong focus my cracking toe nail.
i bet you'd hate real industrial music. >.>

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Maybe you have to respect goa songs a bit to appreciate this song, i don't know, but i do know that the technical side of this song is very impressive and enjoyable for me to listen to. The only thing that erks me a bit is that the bell sounds seems to hit a little to much on the high end. Does it have a high freq cut filter on it? My favorite part would be the way you added in the more tribal sounding drums to intertwine at 0:44 and other times with the song. Cheers,

BreeD

Nice

I'm working on my remix too (the one advantage of being sick :D)

Nice, the bells and rhythm were really good. I took a more melodical/ambient/trance approach with mine, but there are elements I prefer here over mine. Nice job.

Ohh.

Not the best I've heard from you, but I loved the bell-like effects in the beginning. :}

Wrong focus

You're too focused on the bass and rythem, and not nearly enough on the melody.
I suggest you actually try and resubmit this one when you alter it.
At one 1:10, start putting in more melody layers. Something more pronounced than your current samples. It's pretty good, just needs more layers.