Unrefined

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Unrefined

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This is something I just started on and thought sounded cool. It is, obviously far from finished. I plan on leading into a faster paced part later in the song. If you have any ideas, do tell. Lemme know what you think.

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Kazmo

2008-11-11 12:02:00

Sounds cool.

It doesn't go anywhere though. :/

Pianos don't sustain like that in real life..so it sounds really weird.

That sound that came in at 0:55 gets rather annoying, it's quite repetitive, and it's just the right frequency that it rings the ears.

The subtle beat that comes in at 1:22 was cool, took a little while to get here though.

WORK ON IT PLEASE, I really like the lead you use in the intro, just work on the attack of the notes because they're clicky.

Keep it up, you have loads of potential!

Kazmo

GibbiusMaximus responds:

Thanks a lot for the feedback!
Yeah, this is just the idea so far, it will go somewhere
And i know what u mean about the piano, ill try switching the sample.
Yeah, I realize that now, I can probably switch the pattern up to give it variety.
I am currently working on it, between all the other crap ive got to do ;P
But thanks again for all of the advice.
Most people pop on here, give it a shit vote and run without saying a word. The criticism you provided was exactly what I was looking for! Thanks a million!