Score: 8
"Ok... here's my thought..."
date: May 9, 2009
You want suggestions I'll make some... Hope you're ready.
I love the idea you have there BUT!
I like the rythmic synth you have there. I like the chords. I like the wave sample. My bug is with the choir/voice pad. I've been looping the song over and over and it kind kills the calm mood for me. It would be better with either strings (low key) or if you want to stick with voice I'd go with more of a humming sound then actual choirs...
You want to ass something? I'm a sucker for pianos so I'd say piano, but if you want other suggestions and stick with a more ambient sound, I would go with other pads and maybe some twinkling sounds like maybe a toybox or highkey reverbish piano, vibraphone... something celestial...
But I would personally go with a melody... something simple... maybe something melancholic and even a bit sad... Something that carries a feeling of missing someone... someone dead maybe... somebody that will never be back... ever...
Ok so that's enough for me... :) Hope it helped!
May 10, 2009
Author's Response:
nope - the choir stays lol - sorry - spent too much time on that damn thing XD
and we got a twinkling noise in it so far..
I was thinking more of a dirge.. myself.. stuill - your suggestions are noted :)
thanks for the review!
-shawn-