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Xyirx - Tomorrow is Waiti

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This is the song I compose as a request from Anfini.

The song's pretty simple, describing a moment that you have to stand up no matter what obstacle impedes you....

A girl sits under the giant oak tree, sniffing.
She senses the wind that blows beside her.
The wind has its time when it flows off the surface,
And when it touches the jetstream of the stratosphere,
Then I too, should be like the wind,
Who can live when it's touching the ground,
And when it's soaring high in the sky....

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Please enjoy listening. :D
Comments and critiques are welcome. Please be reasonable though.

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Whoa...

Man this is some deep stuff right here. I feel like I'm drowning, in a good way of coarse. I just sat back and let the wind carry me away. The wind that came from another great submission by you. The story goes perfectly with the song. The cello hit me a little odd on the first note but it settled in when all the strings and everything came in. It actually sounded really good with all the accompaniment. Maybe if I was a girl I might have cried, you did manage to get a little water in my eye though. I better get out of here before I actually start to cry. thanks for the submission, another good one!

5/5
-|V|-

Xyirx responds:

Oh, I made you shed? :D Oh, sorry....But I'm also happy that you're touched by the song.

People find the cello loud too, but I'd rather leave it this way 'cause it has strong dynamic which can lead you to the climax of the song more dramatically. I wanna thank you for good reviews and listening the piece also. :D

Sweet

I liked it a lot, just a few thing to justify the 8/10.
0:13 I don't know about the chello, its tone is way too hard, maybe it's just too loud. I'd have expected a softer introduction of strings, maybe only violins instead of the chelli?
The melody has a few moments that sound weird to my ears. 1:16 for instance.
Otherwise this was well done and the mood really fits to the scene you've described. Keep up the good work

Xyirx responds:

I see right to the point where you say that the cello is too loud. XD Actually, I just want to emphasize the cello as main melody for the introduction, but looks like I've done too much. On the 1:16, I just add the extension of 7 (FM7), so it sounds quite distinct, compared to the smooth melody that continuously plays before that bar.

Thank you for constructive criticism. I really appreciate it. And thanks for listening.

great

you play piano so well..
you are so young, yet very talented and poetic.
yes, many people make techno music, but this kind of music is really hard to make and for sure its more relaxing and deep.
keep up the creativity.
show us more of your enchanted world ;)
x

Xyirx responds:

My honor to receive such compliments, though I didn't actually play the notes myself but let the piano roll did the work. :) I don't have MIDI keyboard with me yet, that is. Still, I'm happy that listeners can still enjoy the piece.

Thank you so much....

Nice, Very Nice

I very much enjoy listening to this piece, easy listening is getting harder and harder to come by these days

Xyirx responds:

Most people here in Newgrounds love to listen techno, but there're still lots of soothing classicals out there in the audio portal too. :D Be sure to check them out.

Thanks for your comment. Much appreciated.

muy bien, muy bien

That's how classical is done! You can teach me a lot. I've been trying to make a slow song but I just can't seem to get it the way I want to. But you seem to be great at it. Keep it up!

Xyirx responds:

I'm really happy you've got something from this piece. I started composing slow songs just recently, so it wouldn't be that great, but I try my best. ^^

Thanks for a comment.

Credits & Info

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Listens
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Faves:
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Downloads
109
Votes
6
Score
4.83 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 26, 2008
12:26 PM EDT
Genre
Classical
File Info
Song
2.3 MB
2 min 31 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.