Hmmm

It has alot of potential, but I think the 22 seconds were a little too shorted. The main riff was quite strange, kinda evil. And the last 8 seconds or so, were quite techno. I think that if you made this into a full song it would be very good. Nice job

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should be taken further

Take this and use it as an intro to a longer piece, I think that this would make an awesome start to a fast paced full length song, just be careful not to let it get too messy, in a 22 second short song it doesn't matter but in a longer one it would, but for now just make it longer, mmkay

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Too short

It's basically an introduction for a rock track, but I think that you need to work on taking it further forward, rather than just sitting on this part. It could be taken further - give it some extra lead guitar and the occasional bit of keyboards that wouldn't go amiss.

In answer to your question, no, it's not like a Rock Song. It's a rock riff, but nothing more.

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Not great.

I can see what you tried to do here. The start was alright, nothing amazing but when it all broke the beats it sounded completely off, even if you break up the beats you should still get a "full" sound to it. Not bad.

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Sirtom93.

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Sounds interesting. Could be the intro to a rock/industrial rock song. It's just too short to tell if this is really "rock".

The beginning of the track is pretty nice, but later on it gets too confusing and too messed up. I'm missing a real structure here.

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