ehh...

1) Too bland.
2) Too much, eh how do you say it, drawn-out chord.

1) it's just not very interesting, in my view. It just is, in my view. it just is. The searing chords were actually kind of annoying, in my opinion. Try to make it a little more interesting next time. Don't just use persistent chords. The synth-sound of it didn't help either. But I'm an orchestral type of artist, so that's a personal issue, not a generally helpful tip.

2) I touched on this on #1. The chords are annoying. Really annoying. There's no staccato, no solos, no anything. No rising notes, no falling notes, no portamento, slide, panning, anything. Nothing but chord and drum. Even in an unregistered version of FL Studio 8 one can do more than this. I should know since that's all I have used for 40+ songs. But back on the chords. Those chords are just way too bland. You have to change that for the next song. And I understand that it was made for a videogame, but many videogames have more elaborate songs than that. (there are some exceptions, but we should always aspire to do better than we think we can, or at least better than that person.)

I'm trying not to sound like an asshole. I apologize if I come across as such.