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Date
10/23/2008
File Info
Song
2.1 MB
2 min 17 sec
Score
4.21 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.21 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

This here is a song i recorded.. produced by flashmac

Verse 1
Nothing hard about this shit its just real/
commin' from the midwest its a new musical feel/
inspired by Shady, Atmosphere, and Foremost/
cant forget Cade dog, here's a toast/
To the lyrics that inspire with fire and burning ambition/
its that same ambition that gave me this vision/
to be the best emcee that you'll ever hear/
to connect with y'all lyrically right through your ears/
i cant describe the feeling that i get when i start to spit/
its like a whole world of words fill up my entire compartment/
like,
i dont understand whats goin' on/
but i know that you'll relate to the
words in this song../

chrous
Reppin' the C.H.I
its this normal guy
commin right outta the midwest/
its a revolution of music,
its a evolution of music. x2

verse2
Ima look back on the past and start a new slate/
and illustrate my songs so i could speculate my fate/
ima try to make, many people relate/
but if i can't do it, whatever man give me your hate/
haters are like donaters because they have given me/
the fuel to run on till the end of the next century/
only the great tell you how it really is,
thats why tonight i dont think twice about listenin' to all your bullsh*t,
bitch/

chrous

...thank you..

Reviews


PerfectRandomnessPerfectRandomness

Rated 3 / 5 stars

okay

the reverb killed it. this could have been so much better. you great potential though. it has a nice beat and melody. your voice sounds kind of messed up too. maybe the recording quality isn't great?


Emdee-NF responds:

yeah reverb i know lol. and yeah the mics i use these days arent to great, well who knows maybe my voice is messed up to lol, thanks for the review man.


MadwiggedMadwigged

Rated 3 / 5 stars

woa

Here i am cruisin newgrounds for a song i got in mind, and i stumble on this. Hahaha i actually have a song written to this same beat!

Guess you beat me to it.

The lyrics arnt bad, but that reverb is killin it man. Try placin it on like the key parts of the rhyme, like maybe every 2 or 4 bars. It makes it pop a little, but if you do it the whole time, it looses its effect and sounds... Not to be harsh... But wak.

Keep it up though man.


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Emdee-NF responds:

its cool man and yeah i know alot of ppl told me about the reverb ha. but its a older song and im just to lazy to change it now so im just keepin it like this. but thanks for the review man.


jhende7jhende7

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Huge Potential

Keep your reverb down on the vocal track and try to match up your tones with the beat a bit more. Lyrics are dope though, your going places man

5/5


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Emdee-NF responds:

Thanks alot man, im trying to improve everyway i can. thanks for your review ill keep in mind what you said. take it easy!


T-FreeT-Free

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

As cool as your other submission!

Your songs are very cool, I like them very much! Keep it up.^^



ibeenjamminibeenjammin

Rated 4 / 5 stars

keepin it real

i agree about the flow part flashmac was talkin bout maybe try condensing ur thoughts or checkin if all the syllables correspond. just to make it flow better. but other than that the lyrics r cool and i can tell u care about what ur rappin about. the beats sick (!) as well. keep it up


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Emdee-NF responds:

Thanks man ill try and work on that, and yeah i think its about time for a change on newgrouns(sounds cliche i know haha) but yeah. once again thanks bro.