Not too bad,
Ok, the con's first. well, it's not too bad, just not professional.
I couldn't really hear it that well, it needs to be smooth and clear.
The volume kept changing, so i had to keep changing, my! volume.
one moment it's a soft voice than it turns into fat albert! and at the end of it, it was soo hard to hear.
I could keep going but i wont, besides, if i tried this, it would probably suck.
ok, now the pro's.
you've got good voice, you could be a good voice actor, you just got to practice
and work on your different voices, you could study other voice actors to become
better.
Anyway, keep practicing and one day you could be a really good voice actor.