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Band's First Song

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This is my bands first song in NC,

I'm not quite done with the song.

I used EZ DRUMMER for the drums.

and i used Logic Express 8 for the guitars

Tell me what you think?

~WiLb0b

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NC..?

North Carolina?

I definatly like the sound you guys have going, somewhat reminds me of black dahila murder and some other band i can't remember. There just seems to be a lack of bass.

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wilb0b responds:

lol yeah i re-recorded it, a bit more fluid.

i just posted it a bit ago

and yeah I havent tried recording bass yet, idk how that'll turn out

rata tat tat

besides the fact that i just cummed on myself. it does sound kinda empty. i think it does NEED vocals, but its the most insane shit i've heard in a while... reminds me of deathcore/metalcore... which is fucking great to me... keep it up, i wanna hear more of this...
try a solo!

keep it metal
10/10
5/5

4.45/5.00 (+0.11)

wilb0b responds:

yeah the ending isn't even made up yet i still need to work on it but its pretty epic

It's decent.

It's definitely a good start. However, just guitars and drums make for an empty performance, no? It might just be me, but you should either try to get some sort of melodic instrument in this song and come up with a melody which could contrast the guitar part, or create lyrics and rename the song based on them.

Also, the transition from 0:25-0:28 sounded a little awkward. Perhaps its because you downshift so suddenly after one note from the guitar. It might not be, but perhaps the sixteenth drums in the background can slow down more gradually, over three or four seconds.

I'm just toying with ideas. Feel free to act upon whatever you like. At the moment though, this sounds kinda like background music, which is definitely not what metal was made for, save for video game fights and such.

wilb0b responds:

thanks its not quite done yet and there's no lyrics but its a working progress
:/

quite good

it's a first song... bohh i will see you next year on TV!

wilb0b responds:

hahahaha thanks a lot! I don't think we're that good yet

Better than some.

The intro isnt too appealing to me. But it gets better as it goes on. I dont much care for drums of that sort however. This makes me believe that most bands that sound like this use drum software, lol. No offense to you though. Sounds like you put lots of effort into this, unlike some other shmucks he get record deals for crap. Good effort!

wilb0b responds:

lol thanks man!

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Faves:
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Downloads
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Votes
5
Score
4.50 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 19, 2008
6:26 PM EDT
Genre
Heavy Metal
File Info
Song
2.7 MB
2 min 7 sec

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