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This is a continuation of a remix I started a while ago. Right now I'm sort of experimenting with the song. I'm not too sure of exactly what I want to do. I just want it to sound good. The song is somewhat bland in spots because I haven't figured out what to do there. There is one section where there's probably too much going on. Give me your thoughts.

(Original by KaiserSzandor)

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Average Score: 8.0 / 10

Score: 8

"This is good"

by: Chubsywubbledub

date: October 18, 2008

What you have is really solid. I can't think of anything specific to improve on. It all sounds really good. Something to consider: I think it would be cool if you slowly brought out the 16th notes that appear at 1:43, just like you do with the melody at the beginning but maybe slower. Then you could go from there and deviate from the melody a bit while still maintaining the theme.

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October 18, 2008