I see a lot of potential with this. Love it already and want it on a hardstyle track NAO!! :D

pretty good song

if you made this on FL i can help you to an extent, cuz thats what i use, but im still learning alot of it too

just pm me and ill try to answer some of your questions

Nice man

I See a lot of potential as i2abbitz said
The melody is cool

Well, i cant copy whole i2abbitz review. Becuase i mean actually the same :/

Well, but keep up ur work, i like it

4/5 --- 8/10

-DJ-Fanzie--

Hello there

I see a lot of potential. I'm loving your melody. I like how they both are playing different melodies at the same to make one. It just seems a little empty.

You need a bassline. The lower gated synth isn't doing much for it.
The beat is pretty solid and well made.
I like the little bells you used for a short while.
The break down was nice. Right before the kicks dropped in.
You used the little vocal sample a little too much. Subtlety is key.

I'd love to hear this in a full blown trance song. Bass line, supporting melodies, pads, magnificent builds, maybe have this melody as the main melody, but don't introduce it so early on in the song. Give them a taste, a sense of anticipation, then you build to an almost orgasmic explosion of beautiful melodies.

As you can already tell I'm passionate about music.

Keep up the great work!

-i2 (Paul)

Solid

It's pretty solid, just too short!