Score: 8
"mmm"
date: October 11, 2008
This is tasty remix indeed :D
Great arrangement of Coldplay's clocks, decent choice of instruments. I like the string accompaniments and the simple organ selection.
The reverb is a bit overpowering, makes the bass sounds quite muddy, try cranking up the lowcut controls or just experimenting with a different patch alltogether.
Some of your accented piano chords cause some minor clipping, limit or compress it out.
One thing I must say is, while the melodic and harmonic flow was of this track was carried fairly well, there was really no groove or interesting rhythm structure to make this track keep my headphones glued to my ears throughout the entire near 7 minutes. This could be remedied by a simple drum beat, or just more variation could be used if that wasnt your purpose for the track, some fills and more apparent transitions, or simply just cut out of the some sections hear and make it a condensced song.
Keep it up :D
October 11, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I tried adding drums at first, but none of the patches I had really suited the song very well. I guess I could give it another attempt though. As for the rest of your advice, I'll be sure to implement it if I pick up this song again. Thankyou!
