November 22, 2008
Author's Response:
I don't know what to say about the volume issue. I can hear it fine on my laptop and my headphones. My recommendation would be to turn your volume up all the way and use headphones.
A cadence would not make sense in the context of the piece. This piece doesn't use any formal chord progressions and instead shifts between modes based on the main themes. There is no actual I chord in the end, since it could either be in C major or G mixolydian. The piece is predominantly in G mixolydian, but it isn't decisively established, which is one of the traits that connects it to Episode 1. Also, it doesn't really matter what value the last note is, since the sustain pedal is held for the whole second half of the piece until after the end.
Thanks for the positive review!
EDIT: It's updated. I made the ending more final without using a cadence, so I'm happy.