Score: 7
"Hi there!"
date: September 30, 2008
Your last review asked for me to review two of your other songs (newer ones) I cannot figure it out, so I'm going to pick your two newest songs. Please, if you'd like, review and rate some of my work. It would be nice, but I won't force the issue ;)
-Very nice lead in with the dynamic filter thing going on. Some more drum fills would be desired to give the song more flow and dynamics. It feels like the same beat over, and over, and over, and over, and over, and...well, the point is made! Add variety to the drums. There's some good variations in your melodies/bass/harmony/countermelodies , listen to the song and shape the drums around the song. Add FX where desired too. Be creative! Create whatever is felt, and get into it! The first step is complete, there's a very nice structure to the song, now add the meat.
-ImperfectDisciple