Nice man!

This is what I like about NGAP! No, it probably needs some more texture, but its still awesome man. Its a little slow, but thats just a matter of what your doing whilst listening to it. Maybe some better drums? Idk. I really likke the way you messed with the treble reductor/ band pass on the synth around 2:30. Minimalistic trance isn't really my kinda style, (just listen to my submissions man!) but you could still tell it was really skilful, and that deserves a 10.

10&5
Love and peace.

holy shit.... why the fuck is this below 4?!?!?!!

dude. this is your best song. this is in-fricking-credible. once it gets going this song is exactly what i was telling you about what people want to hear on newgrounds! some things i'd change:
-the kick is good, but the snare, hat and other percussions don't really fit the song.
-the build up is probably one of the best i've heard, but it doesn't climax!!!! i was like, damn this could is gonna make me wanna jump out of my seat and bang my head, but it never really did.... but you could work on that.
-intro is a tad long, but i think it works

ok so basically this song is fucking amazing. it has extreme potential. I don't know if you have heard of nubbinownz, but check out his earlier songs to get some ideas. you're kinda following that genre of music. look at his "mistakes" songs. they have amazing piano that builds into incredible techno.

dude. like honestly. you have potential. with some work, i think you could be 100x better than me. i have trouble with my melodies, but i have everything else down pretty well. you have your melodies down for sure. they evoke emotions. thats beasically the point of music.... and you have that already down.

5/5 10/10 and downloaded. i really hope you get around to finishing this. this has front page potential.

wow this review is long lol. what program did you use for this? i want the project file so i can introduce you to breakcore.