Score: 7
"Needs a better name"
date: October 12, 2008
It's not a bad sounding name for a tune, but it does need some work to complete how it plays completely out. Make the vocals slightly louder and throw in some pumping bass. If it had a few other bits and pieces, just to carry it on as well, it would help a lot - there's not much in the way of variation for this piece at all, which is a shame.
I think that you're certainly getting there, but need just a few more bits to push the song over the threshold for achievement.
[Review Request Club]
October 14, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks. Time to pump out some bass!