Poo on Toast - Demo


Date Submitted

09/29/2008 | 01:00AM EDT

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Industrial Song | 1.4 MB | 1 min 31 sec

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3.76 / 5.00

Score Rank: #60,099
Popularity Rank: #49,344

33 votes

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32 downloads

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Author Comments

Just a demo - please tell me what you think. And this has nothing to do with an event which occurred in my life, it's simply me crapping on with the lyrics.

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Average Score: 7.7 / 10

Score: 7
Shanus

"Strange"

by: Shanus
date: October 13, 2008

Very weird, a mixture of genres. The vocal sample is very weird and creepy. Nice beat.Onlybad part was the ending. It just seemed to fall flat. And at some points the samples dont synch up.But still a pretty cool song

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October 14, 2008

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Score: 7
Coop83

"Needs a better name"

by: Coop83
date: October 12, 2008

It's not a bad sounding name for a tune, but it does need some work to complete how it plays completely out. Make the vocals slightly louder and throw in some pumping bass. If it had a few other bits and pieces, just to carry it on as well, it would help a lot - there's not much in the way of variation for this piece at all, which is a shame.

I think that you're certainly getting there, but need just a few more bits to push the song over the threshold for achievement.

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October 14, 2008

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Thanks. Time to pump out some bass!

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Score: 8
perfect-insanity

"good"

date: October 12, 2008

the vocals are overpowered by the instruments, and it definitely needs more bass in it, but that's been said before many times, the ending came on too quickly there should've been more of a fade out with the last note, and I can't really understand what the vocalist is saying during some of the song if that makes any difference to you, I know some people like their songs with incomprehensible lyrics

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October 14, 2008

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The ending is like that because it's a demo, more vocals will be added. ;)

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Score: 7
Haggard

"\m/"

date: October 12, 2008

This track definatly needs more bass. It just sounds too "nice" right now with all those light and high pitched sounds.

Also, the vocals should be put more into the foreground a bit. They are overpowered by the other instruments from time to time.

The structure of the song is quite nice. I like how you change from the slower to the faster parts during the song.

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October 14, 2008

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Score: 8
Fro

"Good job here."

by: Fro
date: October 11, 2008

I think that this song lacked bass and that if it would have good bass line it would make this a lot better. I don't really think that the drums fit the song very well because they sounded more techno-ish. I think that you should add a transition between the middle part and the rest of the song. I think that the vocals could of been just a tad bit louder, but other then that I didn't have anything against the vocals or the lyrics. This may sound good as a heavy metal song. :D Overall, a pretty good submission.

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October 14, 2008

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Thanks ;)

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