Score: 6
"good job, but"
date: December 12, 2004
here are the things I found wrong:
in the part of the song with the chords, you paused too long in between them. Practice that.
the upper part got too boring after a while. Try some new chords.
the bass was to loud compared to the upper part
no main tune
it stayed the same a lot... you need to variate
please reply soon!
Author's Response:
Well do you play any instrument so you can say 'practice that' :-?
Perhaps I planned it so ;) and there is of course a main tune... the first 4 chords of the bass ;)
Well I can rarely improve the things you found wrong because I'm playing like that!
The only thing i could improve is the variation of chords but if I do that it will sound almost like one of my improvisation and I wanted to try something new ;)
Thanks for your review!