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Sep 27, 2008 | 11:22 PM EDT
File Info
1.8 MB
49 sec
3.44 / 5.00

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Rated 3.44 / 5 stars
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370 Plays | 64 Downloads
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Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

I need to know how to improve this piece. My ears tell me there's to much going on.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hey, Again.

If you're looking for ways to improve the piece, at about ~:35 I heard a perfect time when you had just used a higher chord, that you could've inserted a turning point, taking out one or two sounds from the song and introducing a new one such as a piano or electric guitar and really make a cool tune.

i was thinking of opening with a staccato-y guitar part breaking out into a small solo and then dying down and going back into the original song and ending.

but thats just me xD

comment and rate back?
thanks mate.