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Sep 24, 2008 | 5:05 PM EDT
File Info
3.7 MB
3 min 16 sec
2.08 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 2.08 / 5 stars
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711 Plays | 83 Downloads
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern

Author Comments

An EXCLUSIVE!!! First Actual Song I ever done!! RATE IT!



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


louder vocals!


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad...

Not too shab. You've got potential. To follow up on the comments below on the vocals, try this to bring them out more: First, compress the shit outta them. I usually go as high as a 10:1 compression ratio, but 5:1 works well for a more natural sound. Then EQ. Filter frequencies below 120~200hz to get rid of the unneccessary low noise. Then give it a wide boost of 5db to 1.6khz~2.4khz (depending on what tone you want to bring out). Give 2db to 10khz for added clarity, and if you want a bit more presence than that, you can boost 2-3db to 7~8khz. Hope this helps.

l3al3yT responds:

Thank you, this should really help me out, I'll try this with my next single.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

good fora first

yo the beat is aiight, but needs more switch ups man, and also the vocals need to be LOUDER. pretty good for a first shot tho.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

I hate rap

But I'm objective. It's a decent song, but in rap/hip-hop/whatever you want to call it, the vocals need to dominate everything else. Try increasing the volume in the vocals, and lowering the volume on everything else.