hmm...

louder vocals!

Not bad...

Not too shab. You've got potential. To follow up on the comments below on the vocals, try this to bring them out more: First, compress the shit outta them. I usually go as high as a 10:1 compression ratio, but 5:1 works well for a more natural sound. Then EQ. Filter frequencies below 120~200hz to get rid of the unneccessary low noise. Then give it a wide boost of 5db to 1.6khz~2.4khz (depending on what tone you want to bring out). Give 2db to 10khz for added clarity, and if you want a bit more presence than that, you can boost 2-3db to 7~8khz. Hope this helps.

good fora first

yo the beat is aiight, but needs more switch ups man, and also the vocals need to be LOUDER. pretty good for a first shot tho.