Star_Crossed (unfinished full)

Desyre

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Date Submitted

09/20/2008 | 11:52PM EDT

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Dance Song | 4.5 MB | 1 min 59 sec

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Current Score

4.38 / 5.00

Score Rank: #518
Popularity Rank: #5,767

502 votes

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549 downloads

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Author Comments

Well, here is the long awaited full version... it's not finished... but here's a little something to tide you guys over...

plus for chim chime :D
A worn traveler opens his door, and looks up to the skies. A starry, moon-lit expanse meets him, and the stars seem to dance in front of the traveler's eyes. He must be hallucinating, thought the traveler. But the dance of the Star Crossed was too beautiful. And the traveler watched, hypnotized.

Left and right, the stars threw themselves into the sky, crissing and crossing every witch way, dashing across a wonderful world of darkness and beauty.
The stars wouldn't stop for the world.
They sped up, forming wondrous patterns, radiating intense lights, weaving through the night.
The stars felt like they had never felt before; Such freedom they had never know.
A subtle beat seeped out from one of the stars, a second star created un uplifting tune, and a third continued to dance.
In perfect harmony, more and more people were affected by these mystical stars.
The traveler danced with his heart.
A little girl, lying in bed, had the sweetest dreams she has had in years.
A poor sick soul, bed ridden and burning with pain, felt nothing while the stars danced.
While each soul affected reacted in a different way, each felt the one beautiful, harmonious, amazing, uplifting emotion in the world.
And all because of the Dance of the Star Crossed.
Happiness.

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Average Score: 9.8 / 10

Score: 10
JordanRothery

"What the fuck"

date: October 27, 2009

are you EnvY?

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Score: 10
Demakhis

"Again great"

date: September 29, 2009

This is a great song, all the sounds mesh very well and the intro is kept strong, then it fades out in the middle and comes back in the end to wake you from a dream like state. Please i know you posted this a year ago but finish this song.

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Score: 8
newgeneral

"Nice tunes!"

date: September 12, 2009

It's a really banging tune with a crazy hard trance synthesizer but something is missing and that something makes the main melody and the build up low and disappointing.

When it builds up, with the snares and the synthesizer raising in volume, it got me hyped up but then when it starts the synthesizer goes down in volume and it feels like it's not epic enough. I think the side chaining is not that good, raise the volume of the synth melody, by a considerable amount so it balances the intro as well, as for now it sounds alright but the volume is low. Raise it and it will be totally EPIC. I will favourite this for now. Keep doing what you doing! ;]

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Score: 10
TheBackupCrew

"Wonderful!"

date: August 5, 2009

This song was very well made. we admire your work, but what instruments did you use to make this? please answer, we would love to make a song in this style.

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Score: 10
MrVanNoodles

"Awesome"

date: April 30, 2009

Please finish this :D

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