A tad awkward

The beat needs to be cleaned up, i cant tap my foot to it.
The end is almost bad, in my preference i would use a lower harmony.
The melody is a bit muddy but thats fine with a clean beat.
Just clean it up and try to repost it, and it would probably get a better score.

unblissful

like minh-le wrote The melody does need work especially becuz of the percussion and it doesnt seem to be a song just a loop maybe when u change the medlody and add a harmony it would do better

The beat

I would have given you a better score because the tone of the music was actually soothing and smooth. However, the beat of various music sounds were out of beat to each other. IMO