dude
get some skills. you can't rhyme very well you should practice some more on your beats to as well as your rhymes. then make a new submission.
Yo, check it, this is tha full version of my gangsta freestyle. Fo' shizzle to my homiez!
dude
get some skills. you can't rhyme very well you should practice some more on your beats to as well as your rhymes. then make a new submission.
haha
So you're a 13 year old gangster who smokes crack? That's so funny. You should try and say your lyrics like you mean it more.
wow
paragonx9 sucks compared to this song
roflmao
You got a 10 for effort, because you clearly tried and failed. you wernt rapping, you were talking. Plus your voice is really really high pitched. My friends 8 year old brother sounds manlier
Im crying...
because that was just so bad. but it sounds like you tried hard on it. btw reading your review responses is like reading a Dr. Seuss book.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.