dude

get some skills. you can't rhyme very well you should practice some more on your beats to as well as your rhymes. then make a new submission.

haha

So you're a 13 year old gangster who smokes crack? That's so funny. You should try and say your lyrics like you mean it more.

wow

paragonx9 sucks compared to this song

roflmao

You got a 10 for effort, because you clearly tried and failed. you wernt rapping, you were talking. Plus your voice is really really high pitched. My friends 8 year old brother sounds manlier

Im crying...

because that was just so bad. but it sounds like you tried hard on it. btw reading your review responses is like reading a Dr. Seuss book.