Score: 10
"This is probably the best I've heard so far..."
date: January 20, 2009
As much as I like the beginning, the end as you stated is incorrect. I like the beginning much more than the actual body of the song, and that is what I based my score off of. I feel as if the lead isn't complimented with the bass. I would of enjoyed a little more melody, but that is just personal preference; it was good regardless. I hope to see a complete master of this soon. You did a really good job, keep working at it.
Also, if I may inquire, I would like to know how you created the synth in the beginning, as well as the sweep and the hard kick.