Good for a shot at DnB

You have enough loops/samples in this song to make at least two separate songs. Too much variation after two minutes, I think. At around 1:10 I think you should have already peaked with the songs climax. At 1:28-ish the bass there is great, use it more.
I think that is about all I really noticed. Good job for a tryout in DnB. Keep it up.